which poem is better?

Connor G

New member
1.
There once was a man named paco
who exclaimed with delight how much he loved tacos
he ate tacos all day and tacos all night
until he got taco poisining
and lost all his sight
so he sits all day now as blind as a bat
asking all who walk by
where are my tacos at?

2.
The
bright
and
happy
sky
shining
with
its
glee
is
overcome
by
nightfall
and
now
we
can
not
see

Its for a short poem contest at school prize 50$ so plzzzz help
 
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