Manolito G
New member
i am thinking about getting seriously into poetry, i wrote this the other day:
i want to lose myself in thine eyes
and walk upon the shinning fields
illuminated by the radiance of a merging moon
to wander upon those fields stained by the
dew that emanates from those roses the hands
of love have embraced,
to see thy eyes is to wander through gardens
enchanted by the breath of the chanting souls
that wander hands in hands through the fields
of immortal beauty, and because thy eyes
hold immortal beauty to stand upon them
is to be held in the palms of eternal love
and to be brightened by the awakening of a
never ending dawn where the youth of beauty never dies
i want to lose myself in thine eyes
and walk upon the shinning fields
illuminated by the radiance of a merging moon
to wander upon those fields stained by the
dew that emanates from those roses the hands
of love have embraced,
to see thy eyes is to wander through gardens
enchanted by the breath of the chanting souls
that wander hands in hands through the fields
of immortal beauty, and because thy eyes
hold immortal beauty to stand upon them
is to be held in the palms of eternal love
and to be brightened by the awakening of a
never ending dawn where the youth of beauty never dies