What would be a good thesis statement for a topic on What is a good education

Kyle V

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in the 21st century? I have already came up with one but i need some help determining if it fits with half of my essay because im not fully completed with it yet.

Good Education: The Meaning Of Success
By Kyle Vertoch
The meaning of success has to deal with many things, but in this case, I am talking about how much a good education can mean to a human being. Also how much effort you are willing to put into your entire school career to match what it means to be successful in life. A good education means that one or more people have decided to have a tremendous and happy outlook on life and believe in themselves. These types of people believe that they can exceed expectations of what a normal person would believe in. Earlier in my life, I’ve obtained a great education from excellent teachers and support from them to keep me going. I believe in myself and try my hardest every day that I am in school because I know when I am older; I can have a successful career. I know that teenagers say things about school that should not be said because who knows, one day you might be in a situation where you’re homeless and have nowhere to go. That is the reason why education so important in the 21st century. My Thesis statement are the last two sentences of my first paragraph.

When I was younger, I would overhear kids talk about how much they hate being in school. They were always saying, “We will never use these academics later in life, so what’s the point of being here?” The reason that teenagers say those types of things is because they don’t have a good outlook on life. They don’t see how a good education can affect their own life or realize what success can come into their lives if they do succeed in getting a solid education. Some of the things that can happen to people that do not have a good outlook on their education and lives are poverty, homelessness, and job losses.
 
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