what sounds better for my poem ?

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But if you the took the time to look
And saw in her eyes a code
That told me of her thoughts,
and showed me her load

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But if you the took the time to look
The codes in her eyes decoded
That told me of her thoughts, and journeys that had left her wounded
 
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