iceyblue62093
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I have been writting a short film, starting a little while a go, and right now I only have four pages. It starts with a girl studying under a tree (similar to Alice in Wonderland) but I'm not copying it 
And then she hears her sister messing around behind the tree, bugging her by making noises, and then they start to run around the yard because the sister under the tree got mad. And now their just running around; until the youngest sister came out from the house, and poked the first sister that was under the tree. And the yongest sister is tellling the first sister that she has to water the garden in the front yard, then the youngest sister left. And while the first sister and the youngest sister were talking the second sister left the yard without the first one noing (ok the first sister is named Ashley, the second sister is named Stephanie, and the third one is named Alexis.) As Ashley's watering the garden, I want her to have a dream sequence, but I have no idea what it should be, and during the dream sequence I want it to be like after she has the dream sequence in the garden I want her to wake up from the dream, in her room while she was sleeping. But I don't know what the dream should be Do you have any ideas for the dream? Thank you so much for the help Do you think this is good so far?.. I feel like it's kind of boring right now, and that's why I want the night mare dream sequence in there, and then have it imeaditately end. Do you have any ideas on how I should do the dream sequence part?... Please help This is only going to be like 10 minutes though so it's really short. Please don't steal my ideas please Do you have any ideas on what should happen next too?.. I might be making two films/episodes because I want to put it on youtube to see what people think first and that's why I want a cliffhanger Thank you guys so much Do you have any ideas on what should happen next?..
And then she hears her sister messing around behind the tree, bugging her by making noises, and then they start to run around the yard because the sister under the tree got mad. And now their just running around; until the youngest sister came out from the house, and poked the first sister that was under the tree. And the yongest sister is tellling the first sister that she has to water the garden in the front yard, then the youngest sister left. And while the first sister and the youngest sister were talking the second sister left the yard without the first one noing (ok the first sister is named Ashley, the second sister is named Stephanie, and the third one is named Alexis.) As Ashley's watering the garden, I want her to have a dream sequence, but I have no idea what it should be, and during the dream sequence I want it to be like after she has the dream sequence in the garden I want her to wake up from the dream, in her room while she was sleeping. But I don't know what the dream should be Do you have any ideas for the dream? Thank you so much for the help Do you think this is good so far?.. I feel like it's kind of boring right now, and that's why I want the night mare dream sequence in there, and then have it imeaditately end. Do you have any ideas on how I should do the dream sequence part?... Please help This is only going to be like 10 minutes though so it's really short. Please don't steal my ideas please Do you have any ideas on what should happen next too?.. I might be making two films/episodes because I want to put it on youtube to see what people think first and that's why I want a cliffhanger Thank you guys so much Do you have any ideas on what should happen next?..