What o you think of this small poem?

C

Clock Cleaner

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I feel so lost without your love.

I always come home wishing you were here.

I fantasize kissing you on your neck.

Holding on tight to my dear.

I am Yin and you are Yang.

I wish that you would hurry!!! Come cure this pain.

That I have been feeling for a while.

For ten years and going, things been the same.

I miss you.
 
it's good man
I like your rhymes in there
Also the yin yang thing was really good
talk about how you feel and extend it seems nice with what you have
 
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