C
Country Fireflies
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Okay, I know, it's unedited. So, there is about a 100% chance that there are grammar and paragraphing mistakes. =]
I'm still, also, working out the details of the plot in my head. I only have a vague outline at the moment of what I plan to do. I plan on adding a lot throughout the entire story [or what I have of it]
I've also posted what I have of Chapter 4, which is not finished. I repeat, Chapter 4 is NOT finished.
I'm hoping you will critique my story, give me pointers and suggestions, or maybe show me what needs attention with grammar/paragraphing.
http://storywrite.com/story/239002
Thanks =]
I'm still, also, working out the details of the plot in my head. I only have a vague outline at the moment of what I plan to do. I plan on adding a lot throughout the entire story [or what I have of it]
I've also posted what I have of Chapter 4, which is not finished. I repeat, Chapter 4 is NOT finished.
I'm hoping you will critique my story, give me pointers and suggestions, or maybe show me what needs attention with grammar/paragraphing.
http://storywrite.com/story/239002
Thanks =]