What is the problem with my oral English, give me some advice, please.?

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Chjwok

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I am practicing oral English. When I replayed my own voice, it nearly killed me at first. I can't stand that it is so poor.
Here is my response:
http://www.taisha.org/research/?res=discuss&action=detail&disid=2450
Please give me some advice. What's the main problem with my response, and how to improve it? I am so hopeless about it.
Help!
 
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