What image do you picture in your mind when you read my poem?

[Me! =D]

Please help. i need to draw like an image, but it would really help if you tell me what kind of image you have in your mind when you read it. Thank you!

What comes after joy and laughter?
Only sorrow fills tomorrow,
Deep depression, blind obsession,
Feel the pain, it's come again.
And to be sure there is no cure,
For this grief knows no relief,
And should these eyes see another sunrise,
It means I've tasted another day wasted.

 

[ttteo0328]

A Blank Screen

 

[Max]

Not to be mean but it sound like its a depressed poem.

 

[Dot Eekispae]

I picture a calm vast blue sky with sparkling eyes. Kind of like a look at the sky and a zoom in of the eyes. I love it! Well done!

 

[ttteo0328]

A Blank Screen

 

[Dot Eekispae]

I picture a calm vast blue sky with sparkling eyes. Kind of like a look at the sky and a zoom in of the eyes. I love it! Well done!

 

[errant]

I think that you should use a metaphor or a simile to draw your image.