what doe you think of my poem for michael jackon?

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naughty niamh

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when i look up at the stars I know your shining among them,
Big smiling brown eyes looking down at the world under you,

No constant paparazzi following you where ever you go ,
Just the sound of peace and the faint child's laughter in the background

All the stress is gone of your face,
in your new child like body that you are happy with

When you laugh now its not put on it just pure happiness and delight,
no need to build yourself a never land everything is already there
you run with you little friends on the beach with candyfloss in your hand,

false accusations are haunting you no more ,
you now havent a care in the world you cant do no wrong
In gods kindom you are like any other four year old going on five

You miss your loved ones and that is the only problem you have,
but you know in time they will reunite with you in time,
all you can do now is guide them onto living a happy healthy life without a care in the world
 
Lovely.

I love MJ.

=]

edit - poetry does not have to rhyme [that's to the answer below] - tennyson was one of the greatest poets ... a lot of his work did not rhyme - though it's sort of like dramatic monologue.
 
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