What do you'll think of my poem :)?

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Jerry S

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this is the 4th poem i've written so far. pls lemme know what you'll think of it. thanx :)


last beat

darkness, creeping below the skin
emptiness, feeding me in
time, slowly ticking away dim
sounds, crowding head in
faith, cutting me clean
isolation, dragging me deep
sorrow, bleeding me numb until
my heart, finally gave in
 
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