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lil_lovin_dancer456
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mean answers will be ignored.
i want constructive criticism, not flat out "it sucks" type answers
thanks! and its fairly short excerpt
http://storywrite.com/story/178110
SO this is an excpert, the third chaptre of my story.
i already have a lot of desrciption about how my characters look and stuff before this pt in the novell...so it mite be a bit hard to imagine them. lol
i want constructive criticism, not flat out "it sucks" type answers
thanks! and its fairly short excerpt
http://storywrite.com/story/178110
SO this is an excpert, the third chaptre of my story.
i already have a lot of desrciption about how my characters look and stuff before this pt in the novell...so it mite be a bit hard to imagine them. lol