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As hard as she tried, Sienna couldn't help but glance across the table at Christian and Veronica. They seemed so happy, it was enough to make her sick. "Veronica darling," Christian said reaching out his fork. "Here, try some of this, its marvelous." Veronica took a bit of his fork and widened her eyes in satisfaction. "Oh my, thats wonderful! What is it called-?" "Its chicken!" Sienna called from across the table in a exasperated voice as if it was the most obvious thing. Christian glared at her. "Thank you, Sienna." Sienna smiled in fake politeness. "You're welcome Christian," she said in an all too unctuous voice. She couldn't stand to watch Christian and Veronica act so in love with each other while her and Darien were anything but that. It was time for desperate measures. She placed her hand on Darien's upper thigh and leaned into him softly. "Darien," she said in a sultry voice loud enough for Christian to here. "What do you say we duck out of here early and have our dessert upst
this is an excerpt from the middle of a story my friend and i are writing...

Background:
sienna used to be with christian but she is with darien now against her will (for complicated reasons) but she's still in love with christian. christian has brought a random girl named veronica as his date to make sienna jealous. just remember the good people are sienna and christian and darien is the bad person. Sienna and Christian are royalty and darien is just really rich.
 
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