i only have a verse and a chorus at the moment, but i wanted to ask for suggestions. ill tell you a little bit about the song so you can get a feel for it. im 16 i will be playing this with an acoustic guitar and singing, during the chorus i will either add something to it with a computer or have my friend play guitar also. i have a melody that i wrote it to but i cant really put it in words. so any suggestions are nice.
(v1)
12 minuets ago
the clock struck 9:42
12 minuets ago
i lost you
its hard to see
its hard to believe
from now on we wont be
i wish one last time
i could feel you surround me
(chorus)
one more time
one last time
lets break the rules
just me and you
i know you feel it too
one more time
one last time
dont grow up
just come with me
ill show you what you dont see
(v1)
12 minuets ago
the clock struck 9:42
12 minuets ago
i lost you
its hard to see
its hard to believe
from now on we wont be
i wish one last time
i could feel you surround me
(chorus)
one more time
one last time
lets break the rules
just me and you
i know you feel it too
one more time
one last time
dont grow up
just come with me
ill show you what you dont see