What do you think of this song I'm writing?

Conor

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I think I have the lyrics down... What do you think?

Freeway

His eyes were throbbing with restless conviction
With each murmer of his heart, came a tweak in the diction
Of the words he would muster when he got to ground zero
A simple denial at the cost of a hero

The van AC's blowing manufactured frost
While his hair stands on end, he thinks of time lost
It puts his teeth on edge
And he gets lost in his head

Never ending highways when the radio's turned down
The thoughts of old days slice through the silence with sounds,
Of conversations that ring in his ears
He lets the right brain cry while they left brain steers
Down the dirt misty road at the freeway of fears

The thousand mile markers that all look the same
He's wishing to God that he never came
Repetitive clicks of the blinker when he's changing lanes
It's all driving him insane

And he can't get the confrontation out of his head
And he knows the connotation of that sense of dread
Hovering over him like hell
This roadtrip won't end well.

Never ending highways when the radio's turned down
The thoughts of old days slice through the silence with sounds,
Of conversations that ring in his ears
He lets the right brain cry while they left brain steers
Down the dirt misty road at the freeway of fears
 
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