What do you think of this song I wrote? (youtube link included)?

Jessie Tolle

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I'd love to hear whatever you think, even if you absolutely hate it. I'm looking for anything I can do to improve it and such.

Here's the link:

http://www.youtube.com/user/tollestrupjessie?feature=mhum

I don't know if it's good enough for this, but I do have it copyrighted through the post office so please don't steal it.
 
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