What do you think of this song i wrote in 5 min. one night? (im only 12..go easy on me)?

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They're screaming
it louder
it's only a matter
of time
before
they finally stop

Now it's quiet
no shatter
but it's only a matter
there bound
to start up again

I hear bleeding on the inside
deep breaths on the out
there holding up pictures
beer bottles to count

They're accusing
She's screaming
she wants to get out

But we've been down this road before
So she's not gunna run out the door

Now....
They're screaming
It's louder
It's only a matter
of time
before
they finally stop

Now its quiet
no shatter
but it's only a matter
they're bound to start up again

They're screaming
It's louder
It's only a matter
of time
before
they finally stop

Now its quiet
no shatter
but it's only a matter
they're bound to start up again

Girl, Can't you just do what your told.
Your not the only one..in this home.

take away the knives
take away the guns
Because it's only gunna happen again...

Next Month.


Thanks for reading. I know I should have more versus and less of the chorus maybe..But let me know what you think. Im thinking wither a rock Framing Hanley or a piano soft, Not sure.
 
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