What do you think of this small piece of writing?

Poet-To-Be

New member
Love is strange and unknown. I never expected to find it through Ivanna. She showed me a life that I never knew of. Her eyes, matching an everlasting smile on her face, lured me in, trapping me in her heart forever. The bond grew over time; soon I was in love with Ivanna. Realization of my love for her was a shock, but somehow pleasant. In a way, it felt nice to know whom I loved. The idea of loving, however, terrified me. I had seen so many feel incredible pain from trying the strange thing called love.

I'm only 12, so... :)
Oops, sorry, I realize I put this in the wrong category. My apologies.
 
Back
Top