Young Grip
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I'm 12 yrs old. So if you have any advice on writing could you share them? Btw, is it worth finishing or should i just give up and start over from scratch?
(Verse 1)
Little girl, six years old.
Sittin' at home all alone.
Daddy will get home soon.
She's getting tense.
To keep her mind off dad,
She thinks about her friends.
She hears the front door
Open and slam.
She knows daddy got drunk again.
He opened the bedroom door.
Let the beatings begin
(Chorus x2)
Precious little angel.
What did she do wrong?
Showing her heartless daddy
Love for so long.
Poor little baby,
Wearing long sleeves to cover up a bruise.
Loves her daddy far too much
To tell the police the news.
One day,
That little girl is gonna snap
And he'll pay
For all the times he treated her like that.
(Verse 1)
Little girl, six years old.
Sittin' at home all alone.
Daddy will get home soon.
She's getting tense.
To keep her mind off dad,
She thinks about her friends.
She hears the front door
Open and slam.
She knows daddy got drunk again.
He opened the bedroom door.
Let the beatings begin
(Chorus x2)
Precious little angel.
What did she do wrong?
Showing her heartless daddy
Love for so long.
Poor little baby,
Wearing long sleeves to cover up a bruise.
Loves her daddy far too much
To tell the police the news.
One day,
That little girl is gonna snap
And he'll pay
For all the times he treated her like that.