What do you think of this poem?

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I'm a friend in need and you r a true friend in deed
You heel my wounds and patch me up when I bleed
When my room is too dark. You always turn on the lights
You always warm me up..when I shiver through the night
And I'm really glad to have you in my life.
You the reminder to me next to Allah that things will be alright
You see the good in me even if I'm 99 percent bad
you r the most best friend I have ever had...
May God reward you tremendously
 
Change heel to heal. Get rid of the period after dark. Change r to are. Get rid of mose in most best friend. The rest looks good.
 
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