What do you think of this poem?

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My best friend Marie wrote this poem...She's really into poems..So what do you think of it? Any opinions? Comments or suggestions? It doesnt have a title yet.

It 's already too late I know
Ive crossed the line a long time ago
Didn't have enough courage to stop
My barefoot from walking through the crop

Though I know its isnt wise
On the other side there's no prize
For in the end I'll only gain nothing
But only the fear of losing

I should've listened to the reasons
Rather than understanding each of these seasons
Thinking first before moving
To avoid all the hurting

But sometimes I just follow my heart
Even if it might be torn apart
I can only make sure that what I feel
Is more deeper than anything that's real
 
well coming from a man I think it is great I look at as either being titled as a end to everything or live life to its fullest
 
I don't like it very much sorry. Tell her not to worry as much about the rhyming and concentrate more on the content
 
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