what do you think of this poem?

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karl z

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please comment, don'r be do harsh lol.

What is love?
Love is pain, but is pain love?
When you open your heart to someone then is left unguarded,
Unguarded for a dagger to go straight through.
Not a dagger made of steel but a dagger made of of lies and betrayal
Maybe this is Karma making up for all the wrongs i have done in life,
if it is then i mean sorry more that ever now.
 
Good. You are a good poet.Only I feel it has to be represented.


What is love:
love is pain,
but then is pain love,
When you open your heart
to someone
will you not leave it unguarded,
for a dagger to go straight through.

It is not a dagger made of steel,
but a dagger made of lies and betrayal.
May be this is Karma,
making up for all the wrongs
I have done in my life;
if that is it then
I am sorry
more than ever.
 
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