What do you think of this poem?

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Okay so I just wrote this poem... out of boredom... what do you think of it?

Tonight, is the night,
Miracles will happen, I can feel it,
We’ll make it last forever,
Longer than time should permit.
Tonight we’ll run away,
And not stop until we’re out of breath,
We’ll keep going as far as we can,
Until we’ve got nothing left.
We’ll pass by houses,
And see parents tucking in their kids,
We’ll pass by that school where we met,
And that place where we so often hid.
We’ll find a field of grass,
And just lie there for hours,
We’ll lose ourselves in the dark,
Amongst the trees and the flowers.
We’ll look up and see the moon,
And the all the stars in the sky,
We’ll think about how beautiful they are,
And wonder how they got so high.
Tonight we’ll listen to the animals,
Getting ready to go to bed,
And we’ll throw away our fears,
And replace it with hopes instead.
Tonight all our dreams will come true,
And we’ll prove the bad ones wrong,
Tonight we’ll find a love,
That turned out to be there all along.
We’ll practically freeze to death,
Wandering in the cold air,
But as long as we have each other,
I really don’t even care.
We’ll think about the future,
And make plans to stay together,
We’ll exchange vows tonight,
That we’ll definitely last forever.
Tonight we’ll think about all our problems,
And sort them out in our minds,
We’ll solve them and then forget about them,
Cause we’re about to leave them all behind.
 
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