What do you think of this poem?

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Tenaj E

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The way I wanna see the world...is in my view..my way...
It's my own decision...yet somehow I bring so much tension
I am suffocating in my own life...don't know how to get out
I'm trying to find some escape...but everyone seems to love to hate..
I'm caught in a struggle of fate..all your negativity is hurting me..
and the sad thing is..nobody will ever see...
until death comes to be the rescue...
nobody can think for a mintue on how they dont wanna lose you..
until your fully gone..and done..
I am not double, triple..I AM ONE.
It seems I'm getting torn, and bashed..
for shit I never put a gun to nobodies head for anything..
Yet for some reason..my name is Sin....
& my afterlife..is where I begin..
to be free..from all this so called tension..
So please read this with respect
and understanding
that I never really wanted myself to be who I am today
because now I can't even stand this...
because now ...
I am nobody..
you will ever miss.
 
i think its really good!
and i can totally relate to the whole "theme" of it i guess
i write a lot of stuff like this
a lot of people see it as weird and depressing, but its life.
love it, keep it up!
 
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