What do you think of this poem ?

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Nevets

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I love when people try to write poetry. It's often hilarious. Do you think you could use a variation of soft, like 4 more times?
 
What a beautiful amazing path
That lays before my feet.
So soft seems the soil
The flowers smell so sweet.
The air is softly scented
And warmly caresses my soul
Whispering to me rest love
Be still and simply know.
I step out gently in faith
Knowing not quite where it leads
But trusting those flowers to bloom
For Love has planted the seeds.
So sweet has been the moments
And precious been the days
I am thankful for so many friends
Who walk so many ways.
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