What do you think of this poem?

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Falling so fast, never knowing the slightest
Falling so right, it’s real, at your surest
But hitting the ground is like dying
The words finally trickle in, crying
Am I to know my emotion on the spot?
I must fall, think and question
My ever last and truest thought
But who is to say I be wrong in judgment
When I pick and chose with personal perception
To never know I’m wrong, or right
But to follow her view is deceitful
Down the path to my most brutal bite
I feel cross in my opinions, but right
I Cheer and laugh, in the highest of mood
But like the hourglass spilling its last spec
I hit the glass and die, to realize days…
Through the pupils of your eyes….
It is just as true…. just as right….
I wish I could see it better,
Without death in my life.
 
Very very very deep..........
Very good, it was wonderful........
I'm not very good at deep poems like this, I wish I was....
Put more poetry on 'Answers' I want more!
 
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