What do you think of this poem?

Bubbles

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SPACE IS BIG
In the darkness of the night,
The only small, twinkling light,
Far above, way up high,
In the vast open sky,
So small they seem,
So delicate, a dream,
But the stars just are,
So very far.
In another galaxy,
A star burning bright, you see,
That’s the star we dream upon,
The one we throw wishes on,
A thousand miles, in between,
But big enough to be seen.
Our home barely a speck of dust,
Not even, if you must,
So take a step back,
Don’t shoot for the end of the track,
Shoot up at the stars,

You know it’s much bigger out there.

It is about dreaming big and bla, it's pretty corny, but how is it?
 
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