what do you think of this poem to my newborn son (Adam sweet little boy)?

[gale198278]

I've been blind and I couldn't see that all the love I've wanted is right here in front of me.
You were once just a thought in far away dreams.
Now here I am holding you in my arms watching you look in to my eyes
you give reason to get through another day.
Maybe it's how you love me in your special little way.
And when it gets hard for me to sleep at night....
you wrap your little arms around me.
You make this hell on earth seem more like a peaceful bliss.
That great big kool-aid smile and the twinkle in you eyes.... Your laughter and smiles
which go on for miles,
warms my heart and soul.
You're growing up so fast,
Every time I look at you it makes me want to cry.
But they're not tears of sorrow; they're tears of pride and joy....
as I wish each moment with you to last forever.
My little boy will someday be a man
and right by your side I will forever stand.
I will pick up the pieces when you fall,
I will hold your hand and help you stand tall.
And when the day comes when you are on your own,
never feel that you are alone.
No matter how near or far apart
I am always right there in your heart. Always know that
no matter what, I will always be there for you.
any tips to make it better?
the name of the Poem is : " Adam My little boy"

 

[anonymous1]

I think you should say to your son:

Adam, welcome to earth. You are going to experience pain like you've never experienced before. You're going to wish you were dead at some point in your life. God hates you.