What do you think of this poem to my friend?

Tinkerbell

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This is a poem I wrote to help with closure for a friend of passed away. I'd appreciate your opinions. Please don't be harsh. I am still hurting.

I don't remember how we met
but it doesn't matter because
we became quick friends.

We were best friends
and been through a lot.

We told each other everything.

Shared a lot of laughter
and a lot of tears.

Two very strong people-
not allowing the other to
take advantage.

Which created some tension
from time to time.

We've always been able to
make amends.

This last argument-
was our last one.

We never got the chance
to make things right.

You were in an accident
that claimed your life.

I've been here-
angry at everyone, myself included.

Angry because we had a fight.
Angry because you didn't have your seat belt on.
Angry because my best friend was gone.

I know death is a part of life-
but it still hurts you are gone.

I miss you so much-
I think about all of the fun
we used to have.

Even though it has been
23 years, I still
I think of you often.

Wondering why the pain
is still so intense-
so fresh.
 
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