What do you think of this poem that I wrote?

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Conor

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Can you understand what it's about?


Silent Raid

Tipping my toes down the pitch black stairs,
Hands, stretched, antennae in the air.
Sandals slap my soles, heart leaps,
Soul tears. Regretting this
Sweating ballet for
The locked cabinet's
Forbidden
Royal,
Crown
 
What you did with the syllables is cool, I like that. I like that a lot(:
Good job!

EDIT:
But I have no idea what's happening. Maybe someone getting ready for something important? I'm not sure.
 
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