What do you think of this Poem that I wrote?

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U R F&%$ing AWESOME dude i've lived like that for the past 3 yrs hurts like hell 10 man 10 all the F&%$ing way 2 lines into it i was already into it check out my poem and answers to other poems you'll have to look at my profile though
 
How old, based on this Poem, would you guess I am? And on a scale of 1-10, what was it? If you like this, I have a profile on writerscafe.org. Kameron Armitage. I would love for anyone to e-mail me what you think:) thank you very much:)



It's painful to see.

Your love for him growing stronger.

None given to me.

Can't grasp this much longer.



Not me.

It's him.

This hurt will never drift.

Can't get.

What I thrive.

Love is not a gift.



I am seeing a never ending Mirage.

As I continue to chase you, with no chance of success.

The only thing that love attracts is distress.



Yet I welcome it.

As if it is wanted.

And now I cannot forget.

And I am still being haunted.



Please, set me free.

Rejecting.

Accepting.

That's all that I need.



But one thing I won't do.

Is leave without trying.

I need to either be with you.

Or get closer to dying.



Although it may hurt, I will thank you deeply.

Because all that I want, is for you to see.

The real me.

Who truly.

Loves thee.

With one last plea.

Please set me free.
 
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