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Shee

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I am sorry for the way I am.

We stop, we stare, deciding what moves to make
And what emotions we must spare.
We glance up, we gulp, knowing what thoughts to miss
And what words we must not say,

I decide to be one in alone,
To be cordial once, to turn swiftly with regret
As I head back home with
A claim of indifference,
A stare of pure impudence,
A voice swollen with indolence,
And a nonchalant turn of the feet
In the direction of a door,
A door of opportunity,
Shut for eternity,

And All I can say now is,
I am sorry for the way I am.


I know the structure is sloppy but have at it!
 
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