Miss Lissa
New member
I know it doesn't flow at all. So please just ignore that. I don't write poetry often.
What do you think of it? Constructive criticism is very welcome.
What would you name it?
I follow the gaze of empty expressions,
Going through, without brushing past.
The clamor of silence pierces the air.
Overwhelmed, and not feeling a thing.
Memories like film, missing their theater.
I watch the past, the aspersions neglected.
Now counting the costs, I continue.
Intrigued with both retrospect and disgust.
The depth within the darkness, overruns perception.
Taking in immolation and spitting out monstrosity,
A flicker of light, the false accusation of hope.
And momentarily, I have a new interpretation.
Yelling my loudest, with no one to listen.
Restless eyes, which meet no other.
All alone, searching for an answer.
A broken soul, and a vibrant heart.
PS. Be friendly about the criticism. I'm 13.
What do you think of it? Constructive criticism is very welcome.
What would you name it?
I follow the gaze of empty expressions,
Going through, without brushing past.
The clamor of silence pierces the air.
Overwhelmed, and not feeling a thing.
Memories like film, missing their theater.
I watch the past, the aspersions neglected.
Now counting the costs, I continue.
Intrigued with both retrospect and disgust.
The depth within the darkness, overruns perception.
Taking in immolation and spitting out monstrosity,
A flicker of light, the false accusation of hope.
And momentarily, I have a new interpretation.
Yelling my loudest, with no one to listen.
Restless eyes, which meet no other.
All alone, searching for an answer.
A broken soul, and a vibrant heart.
PS. Be friendly about the criticism. I'm 13.