what do you think of this poem i wrote?

S

Sarah

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honest feedback plz! all comments are appreciated!

Every time I lied
I cried
Because it hurt me to

And every time you broke
My heart
I know I broke yours to

And every scare you made
Wont fade
Because they cut so deep

And every tear I shed
Will not be dried again
Because its not worth it

And whenever you’re not here
I crash and burn, crying tears

And every time I see your face
It hurt me more
And every tear you caused
Left a scar on me cant you see
You hurt me
 
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