what do you think of this poem i wrote?

Sarah

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its called everything same as my last one ik its long but any feedback is greatly appreciated

I want a guy who isn’t lame
Who feels the hurt when im in pain
Who isn’t always tough, its okay if he cries
Someone who’d be there if I needed my tears dried

Someone who’s not afraid to fall in love with me
And trust me with his everything
Someone to keep my secrets safe
Who wouldn’t cause heartache and pain

Someone to tell me im beautiful
And that I’m everything to him
Someone who says ‘I love you’
Out of the blue
Because he knows I want him to

Someone who’s heart would break
If I ever told him I’m in pain
Someone who would talk to me, everyday
Not because he has to but because it’s the only way
He’d get through his day
Or he’d make mine better then ok

Someone who asks more than ‘what’s up’
Someone who would care about love
Someone who could love me
More than anything

Someone who could heal my cuts
Just because he gave his love
Someone who would need me
As much as I need him

Someone who tell me everything
Same as I tell him
Someone who would let himself
Be wrapped around my finger
And not deny it just to look tough

I want you to be my someone
And I want to be yours
If I do something you don’t like
Tell me I will make it right
For you
But I want to know you’d do the same for me
this should be fair game you see

So tell me one last thing
Could I be your everything?
 
OMG that is serious good! Write it into a song!
Ur so good! Im jealous. ;)
Once u bcum famous, I'll be the first to buy your alblum!
 
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