What do you think of this poem I wrote?

Clock Cleaner

New member
Born a Marine.

We always repeat things.

Not done right the first time break it down and repeat.

No matter the time.

Symbolic for we never fail nor do we retreat.

Stare in the face of the enemies we meet.

Stare are problems in the face like its the woman that's meant to be.

Patience is all it takes and I can't their daggers will not hurt me.

First to enter last to leave.

When I'm angry, watch how many people plead.

Born a Marine, 1st Tank Battalion, Delta Comp.

They say we all win some , but I just lost one.

Get up stick and move.

Don't stay bitter and confused.

You born to win or you born to lose?

Born a Marine, I guess I will get rich or die trying.

Better than being in rusty ghettos drugging and criming.

The End
 
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