what do you think of this poem? i would like your opinion,?

~I'll be strong~

Get out of my face,
Stop yelling at me,
I'm sorry I'm not athletic,
I'm sorry I'm not pretty.

Get out of my face,
Stop yelling at me,
My brother and I aren't a disgrace,
Why can't you just see?

You never have and you never will,
If only, if only, you could feel.
If you could feel what it's like to be hit,
Your eyes are lit with discouragement.

Don't worry mom,
I'll be strong,
For you, For brother,
And of course for god.

My eyes are now glistening,
With tears once again,
Why bother telling you why?
You're not even listening.

Don't go for brother,
I'm begging you please!
I much rather you keep hitting me.
I have bruises,
Sure it will hurt, getting another.

Get out of my face,
Stop yelling at me,
I'm not dead brother,
I'll be by your side,
For always,
And eternity.

Im only 12 so please dont be rude,
i dont get beat, i just imagened it, soo
please leave helpful comments!


and please check out my other poems!
Thanks so much!
you have no idea how big of smile i have on my face right now!
i dont get abused in any way,
i just imagine the things i write about!
i've only been writing for a couple of days! thanks so much! :D
 
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