what do you think of this poem i just wrote?

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lost in the darkness of my misery
the cold pains of loss and remorse
the longing for kinship of another
slipping from reality into fantasy

leaving alone on the path into darkness
guided by fear and sight of mirage
stumbling across the decay of my mind
to reach a ledge that teeters above madness

the scores of regret and unchangeable moments
losing my grip on sanity and reason
leaning to peer below the horizon
disappointed at the unchanging rhythms of sin

crawling below the feet of humanity
hugging the dirt and refuse of unwanted treasures
pushing away sparkles of hope and happiness
resting in the valley of shame and disgust
yes, it is dark and depressing.
that is the point.
 
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