pepper joose
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Inhale this high, my love
into the sky, thereof
plunder my temple, skin to skin
there we will share, sin for sin
my secret love, within
this weightless feeling, heaven.
i'm being obligated to write a poem about love and everyone will read it. Is it too corny? Should i scrap it? it seems ok to me, but it might sound stupid to everyone, i'm nervous, but please tell me what's wrong with it.
ok thanks, but does it really have to make that much sense?
into the sky, thereof
plunder my temple, skin to skin
there we will share, sin for sin
my secret love, within
this weightless feeling, heaven.
i'm being obligated to write a poem about love and everyone will read it. Is it too corny? Should i scrap it? it seems ok to me, but it might sound stupid to everyone, i'm nervous, but please tell me what's wrong with it.
ok thanks, but does it really have to make that much sense?