What do you think of THIS one?

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Don H

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Ok, second attempt at iPod like things.
A) I know her pose is wierd. I just found a photo and used it.
B) Yes, I know that's a strange place to put the iPod. But she's holding her hands over her breasts, so there's really no way to put the iPod in her hands.

Other than that, I took everyones advice. This one's a lot smoother, you can see her in profile, etc...
Any other advice?

http://www.flickr.com/photos/8033773@N07/2370175497/
 
I think that the color could be a little more pumped up. The iPod ads always "pop" and aren't as calm. Just think of this constructive criticism.
 
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