ballerina2112
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Once More
I lay awake in my bed
The shadows sprawl across the wall
I toss and turn to no avail
I hear the wind howl
The moon glowes an eerie gold
And as I lye fretting
About trivial matters my ears hear
A strange noise
And I think to myself what was that sound
A sound that can only be made
Sinister through night
A sound that sends tingling chills down my back
My heart pounds in my chest as I worry
Why now, Why this time
I crawl under my covers
Quick as can be
Careful to make no noise
The door opens
Blood rushing to my head
I gently peak from beneath
My warm burrow to see
A shadow of a monsterous creacher
Sprawl across my floor
It worries me
Greatly
I squeeze my eyelids shut
Leaving a gap
The monster approaches
The door opens
She steps through
Walks painfully slowly to me
And kisses my head
and says goodnight
I have evaded detection
Once More
Once More
I lay awake in my bed
The shadows sprawl across the wall
I toss and turn to no avail
I hear the wind howl
The moon glowes an eerie gold
And as I lye fretting
About trivial matters my ears hear
A strange noise
And I think to myself what was that sound
A sound that can only be made
Sinister through night
A sound that sends tingling chills down my back
My heart pounds in my chest as I worry
Why now, Why this time
I crawl under my covers
Quick as can be
Careful to make no noise
The door opens
Blood rushing to my head
I gently peak from beneath
My warm burrow to see
A shadow of a monsterous creacher
Sprawl across my floor
It worries me
Greatly
I squeeze my eyelids shut
Leaving a gap
The monster approaches
The door opens
She steps through
Walks painfully slowly to me
And kisses my head
and says goodnight
I have evaded detection
Once More