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Elizabeth8
Guest
Some feed back for my two poems? and i don't have titles, I am not good at naming things, any suggestions? please and thanx!
People
Some are mean
Some are nice
Some are just normal
Though, what is normal really?
Nothing
There is no such thing
It's an opinion
A figmat of everyones imagination
If everyone is normal
That just means no one is
Either way,
Some people are like me
Some ae like you
But were all just people
Everyone's faces were becoming a blur
One big surreal blur
When I started to loose everything
I couldn't hear
I couldn't smell
I couldn't feel
The the room was spinning
And i couldn't stop it
I thought the world was coming to an end
All i could do was scream
I fell to the ground
And everyone was starring confused
When i realized
The world wasn't coming to an end
My world was.
People
Some are mean
Some are nice
Some are just normal
Though, what is normal really?
Nothing
There is no such thing
It's an opinion
A figmat of everyones imagination
If everyone is normal
That just means no one is
Either way,
Some people are like me
Some ae like you
But were all just people
Everyone's faces were becoming a blur
One big surreal blur
When I started to loose everything
I couldn't hear
I couldn't smell
I couldn't feel
The the room was spinning
And i couldn't stop it
I thought the world was coming to an end
All i could do was scream
I fell to the ground
And everyone was starring confused
When i realized
The world wasn't coming to an end
My world was.