Illumination
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Please, tell me what you think? 
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It slowly becomes apparent.
The dagger resting in his hand,
Has a blade that is only as sharp
as the hatred of his thoughts.
The blood that flows through it
Will relinquish the name of the killer
In clear luminescence,
before a judging light.
He rests his hands in a river of blood.
Blaming his savior for what he's done.
Blessed with a curse.
Deeper and deeper,
The cuts continue to spread across his arms.
Widening with each word that escapes his lips.
It's only a matter of time.
Step on, persevere, tell yourself the end is near.
Trapped in a cage of dishonesty and disbelief.
His ears have become dull. Eyes clouded.
Fate is a cruel punishment.
He rests his hands in a river of blood.
Blaming his savior for what he's done.
Blessed with a curse.
Keep screaming at the stars.
This has gone too far.
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THANKS!
----
It slowly becomes apparent.
The dagger resting in his hand,
Has a blade that is only as sharp
as the hatred of his thoughts.
The blood that flows through it
Will relinquish the name of the killer
In clear luminescence,
before a judging light.
He rests his hands in a river of blood.
Blaming his savior for what he's done.
Blessed with a curse.
Deeper and deeper,
The cuts continue to spread across his arms.
Widening with each word that escapes his lips.
It's only a matter of time.
Step on, persevere, tell yourself the end is near.
Trapped in a cage of dishonesty and disbelief.
His ears have become dull. Eyes clouded.
Fate is a cruel punishment.
He rests his hands in a river of blood.
Blaming his savior for what he's done.
Blessed with a curse.
Keep screaming at the stars.
This has gone too far.
---
THANKS!