I posted this song a few days ago, but I finally got a chance to work on it some more... So what do you think? I'm still not sure if it's finished yet, it just doesn't really feel complete.
I was thinking of taking out the chorus between the second verse and the bridge, and maybe repeating the chorus at the end or something, let me know what you think
Verse one.
All those inside jokes that no one else understands...
I don't even know how to be me,
Without you here to hold my hand.
I see your face everywhere I go,
The idea of “us” is stuck in my brain.
I did everything you wanted,
Just because you said so…
Why is it causing me so much pain?
Chorus.
I thought I was smarter than this.
Now I feel like a fool.
Left lying here alone again...
You came up with dazzling words,
And I drank it all in...
Disguised behind extravagant lies,
You were such a beautiful sin.
Verse two.
Everywhere I look, there’s a memory,
Things hidden in our past…
I thought that you would always be here,
But you never planned to make it last.
I hoped you would come to your senses,
And see what you left behind.
But you never even turned around...
And I realized you were never mine.
Chorus.
I thought I was smarter than this.
Now I feel like a fool.
Left lying here alone again...
You came up with dazzling words,
And I drank it all in...
Disguised behind extravagant lies,
You were such a beautiful sin.
Bridge.
They say love is blind, so I guess I was too...
You can’t always trust your heart,
You never know what it’ll get you into…
Chorus.
I thought I was smarter than this.
Now I feel like a fool.
Left lying here alone again...
You came up with dazzling words,
And I drank it all in...
Disguised behind extravagant lies,
You were such a beautiful sin.
I was thinking of taking out the chorus between the second verse and the bridge, and maybe repeating the chorus at the end or something, let me know what you think
Verse one.
All those inside jokes that no one else understands...
I don't even know how to be me,
Without you here to hold my hand.
I see your face everywhere I go,
The idea of “us” is stuck in my brain.
I did everything you wanted,
Just because you said so…
Why is it causing me so much pain?
Chorus.
I thought I was smarter than this.
Now I feel like a fool.
Left lying here alone again...
You came up with dazzling words,
And I drank it all in...
Disguised behind extravagant lies,
You were such a beautiful sin.
Verse two.
Everywhere I look, there’s a memory,
Things hidden in our past…
I thought that you would always be here,
But you never planned to make it last.
I hoped you would come to your senses,
And see what you left behind.
But you never even turned around...
And I realized you were never mine.
Chorus.
I thought I was smarter than this.
Now I feel like a fool.
Left lying here alone again...
You came up with dazzling words,
And I drank it all in...
Disguised behind extravagant lies,
You were such a beautiful sin.
Bridge.
They say love is blind, so I guess I was too...
You can’t always trust your heart,
You never know what it’ll get you into…
Chorus.
I thought I was smarter than this.
Now I feel like a fool.
Left lying here alone again...
You came up with dazzling words,
And I drank it all in...
Disguised behind extravagant lies,
You were such a beautiful sin.