What do you think of these characters for the book that I'm writing?

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Name: Molly Chantel Rosney
Gender: Female
Age: Fifteen
Eyes: Golden Brown
Hair: Curly, Dark Brown, Highlights
Additional Details: Molly is deaf in one ear, and she had a long scar down one arm. Injuries were obtained as a child in a house fire. She is terrified of flames, smoke, even sparks. Her parrents died in the fire when she was five. She lives with her foster mother, Nava.

Name: Nava Ailsie Shalev
Born: In Israel
Gender: Female
Age: ThirtyFive
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Black with Streaks of Silver
Additional Details: Nava was born in Israel, but she moved to America so that she could become a Christian without her Jewish family finding out. Has two foster children, Molly and Aidan, who are both slightly disturbed. Works as a preschool teacher. No husband or boyfriend. Speaks English and Hebrew.

Name: Aiden Clair Kiraen
Gender: Female
Age: Thirteen
Eyes: Pale Grey
Hair: Thick Black Curls
Additional Details: Aiden has been a pyromaniac since she was eight. She has tried to kill herself twice. Once she lit a house of fire, (a stranger's house) and sat on the floor and watched it burns down aroung her. (When she was ten.) The other time, she drank some cleaning chemicals from under the sink, (when she was seven) and she now has scars on her neck from the surgery it took to save her. She likes to burns photos of Molly, and (to Molly's horror) loves to burn them in front of her. Because of this Nava has hidden cameras in Aiden's room, and three smoke detecters. Aiden goes to a counselor twice a week.
To AikidoKo... :

Thank you for the advice. But I just wanted you to know that I did do my homework on these names. Molly is a pretty common name, as is Nava in Israel. And I wanted Aiden to has a rather different name, something that wasn't too girly. Also, Aiden means "flame". So I may have thought about this more than you suspected... And I won't be writing Nava's full name out all the time. I will simply refer to her as Nava. But, thank you again for trying to give me advice instead of simply agreeing. (Although I am very happy that you people like them!!)
 
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