what do you think of the song i wrote ?and what should i name it ?

[Tatyanna W]

i always want what i cant have, but tonight that's gunna change, because dont love you anyways no, not anymore.i dont love the way your undoing my belt in the rain when your wishin i was her you left me no choice but t walk away leain my heart torn into pieces while thinkin to myself why did i think he was the one who couldset me free and never leave but tonight you proved me wrong and i justthough id tell you, i found someone else im happy being with he treats me right hes always there n he always says those three words you could never say sorry boy but your missin out n he has what youll never get back because of what you did n he had to go out of his way to fin the pieces fo my heart that you so carelessly left behind so tonight when hes taking off my belt i will turn out the lights, and tell him i love him.


i wrote that in like 5 minutes.. and id appreciate it if you guys tell me what you think or if theres anthing i should change and improve onn thankks.