What do you think of the blurb I created?

Jaidee

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I came up with this story idea and I wanted to write a blurb to see how it looked and what people sounded. And I also need a title as well. I have an idea in mind but it doesn't sound that good.

I’m trapped in a web of perfect and there’s no way out… well, there could be one way – but there’s no way I’ll be able to do it, let alone get away with it. Is there?


Callie Robbins hates her family. They’re perfect and are all about putting on appearances to the point that Callie can’t stand them anymore. She’s tried running away but that didn’t work so now she’s stuck with them.


But there is one way out…


Callie meets Cain, a boy who claims to be living on his own after he killed his parents. He invites Callie to enjoy the same sense of freedom, but she’s hesitant. Could she really murder her family and get away with it?


What did you think? (No paranormal-ness included in the story idea by the way)
Kristen, they don't suck. I like them a lot. Thank you for answering my question!
 
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