FashinFeen*
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What do you guys think of my story.
Here's the plot:
A conceited 18 year old Eric Reynolds is popular football player at his high school in Kentucky. Alongside with his girlfriend Ashley Tyler¬who is a popular cheerleader and his 3 best friends Austin , Keifer, and Mason his life seems complete. But one day after school during football practice, he and his friends discover a time capsule buried in the back of the school. They find many cool items but Eric discovers a memorable item about his deceased mother who passed away many years ago. So he goes through all extents to find out who put it there and what they know about her passing. Throughout he endures so much pain and everyone soon realizes that he is in fact good-hearted.
feel free to make some suggestions, and what do you think i should make the item Eric finds?
Here's the plot:
A conceited 18 year old Eric Reynolds is popular football player at his high school in Kentucky. Alongside with his girlfriend Ashley Tyler¬who is a popular cheerleader and his 3 best friends Austin , Keifer, and Mason his life seems complete. But one day after school during football practice, he and his friends discover a time capsule buried in the back of the school. They find many cool items but Eric discovers a memorable item about his deceased mother who passed away many years ago. So he goes through all extents to find out who put it there and what they know about her passing. Throughout he endures so much pain and everyone soon realizes that he is in fact good-hearted.
feel free to make some suggestions, and what do you think i should make the item Eric finds?