im thinking of publishing a story to wattpad, but i dont know if its good . doesit make sense? btw, this isnt the whole story,, just the first chapter.
I woke to the sound of my iPod Touch alarm. I couldnt wait until these last two weeks of school were over, so i wouldnt have to hear those irritating xylophones for another month.
"Aria, are you up yet?!" My mums voice echoed down the stairs and erased the small fragment of sleep that was daring to pull me under again.
"Yes.." i mumbled, and i heard my older sister Kaitlyn groan.
After i got out of bed, got dressed into my uniform, and ate my usual breakfast of choc-chip pancakes, i hurried back downstairs into the bathroom.
Now, im not one of those people who say theyre fat or ugly - though i would love it if my double A cup would grow a bit one day - im actually pretty average. i tan easily, unlike my friends and sister, and i have bright green eyes that most people would envy.
"Shove, love" Kaitlyn said, jokingly pushing me out of the way and perfecting her hair in the mirror.
"Correct me if im mistaken, but arent you supposed to be out of the house by now?" i teased.
"Its not my fault Monash is still analysing my C.V." She told me when she had finished putting her hair in a bun, ready for work at Safeway.
"Bit early for work, isnt it?"
"Well, now that i have the spare time, they decided i could have a few more shifts. They just want me that much, cus im such a good worker." I laughed, and stole the mirror back to apply my mascara, eyeliner, and hair mousse.
so, what do you think? any feedback is fine, and if i stuffed up any grammer or spelling please tell me
thanks everyone!
ive fixed a few things up, and ill publish it soon. my wattpad username is megaan and the story title is going to be 'Let me be your dinosaur' or 'Darling, Ill be your dinosaur' or something along those lines
I woke to the sound of my iPod Touch alarm. I couldnt wait until these last two weeks of school were over, so i wouldnt have to hear those irritating xylophones for another month.
"Aria, are you up yet?!" My mums voice echoed down the stairs and erased the small fragment of sleep that was daring to pull me under again.
"Yes.." i mumbled, and i heard my older sister Kaitlyn groan.
After i got out of bed, got dressed into my uniform, and ate my usual breakfast of choc-chip pancakes, i hurried back downstairs into the bathroom.
Now, im not one of those people who say theyre fat or ugly - though i would love it if my double A cup would grow a bit one day - im actually pretty average. i tan easily, unlike my friends and sister, and i have bright green eyes that most people would envy.
"Shove, love" Kaitlyn said, jokingly pushing me out of the way and perfecting her hair in the mirror.
"Correct me if im mistaken, but arent you supposed to be out of the house by now?" i teased.
"Its not my fault Monash is still analysing my C.V." She told me when she had finished putting her hair in a bun, ready for work at Safeway.
"Bit early for work, isnt it?"
"Well, now that i have the spare time, they decided i could have a few more shifts. They just want me that much, cus im such a good worker." I laughed, and stole the mirror back to apply my mascara, eyeliner, and hair mousse.
so, what do you think? any feedback is fine, and if i stuffed up any grammer or spelling please tell me
thanks everyone!
ive fixed a few things up, and ill publish it soon. my wattpad username is megaan and the story title is going to be 'Let me be your dinosaur' or 'Darling, Ill be your dinosaur' or something along those lines