Amber 1020
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"Feel Reality"
You can't fight the tears.
There's nowhere to run,
Nowhere to hide.
When the enemy is yourself.
I see through your fake smiles,
Through your silence.
Share the screams that only you hear.
Fear is only a state of mind.
Darkness only comes if you let it,
Open up your eyes.
See the truth that's standing in front of you.
I will face my reality.
This was started on about 9/12/09 and finished I think 9/18/09. I'm not sure if I want to reword the last line. So please tell me, what do you think of my short poem?
Thanks to all who answer!!
You can't fight the tears.
There's nowhere to run,
Nowhere to hide.
When the enemy is yourself.
I see through your fake smiles,
Through your silence.
Share the screams that only you hear.
Fear is only a state of mind.
Darkness only comes if you let it,
Open up your eyes.
See the truth that's standing in front of you.
I will face my reality.
This was started on about 9/12/09 and finished I think 9/18/09. I'm not sure if I want to reword the last line. So please tell me, what do you think of my short poem?
Thanks to all who answer!!